[ALAC] [CPWG] Minor changes to EPDP Board replies

[Greg Shatan [ALAC]]

I support these changes.

Greg

On Mon, Jan 10, 2022 at 11:56 AM Alan Greenberg via CPWG <cpwg at icann.org>
wrote:

> Holly identified two problems with the Replies currently before the ALAC.
>
> 1. In the first paragraph of the reply to Question 1, the word
> "proscriptive" was used instead of "prescriptive". I have corrected this
> error.
>
> 2. In the 2nd sentence of the reply to Question 3, Holly commented
> that the meaning of the sentence was not clear. I have simplified it
> changing
>
>     "Ultimately the adopted Directive will need to factor in the
> input the various EU bodies are receiving as well as being the result
> of negotiations between the EU Parliament and Council."
>
> to
>
>     "The Directive eventually adopted by the EU will need to factor
> comments received as well as being the result of negotiations between
> the EU Parliament and Council."
>
> Neither of these changes alters the intent and meaning of the
> responses and I suggest that they be incorporated.
>
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