[ALAC] Minor changes to EPDP Board replies

[Alan Greenberg]

Holly identified two problems with the Replies currently before the ALAC.

1. In the first paragraph of the reply to Question 1, the word 
"proscriptive" was used instead of "prescriptive". I have corrected this error.

2. In the 2nd sentence of the reply to Question 3, Holly commented 
that the meaning of the sentence was not clear. I have simplified it changing

    "Ultimately the adopted Directive will need to factor in the 
input the various EU bodies are receiving as well as being the result 
of negotiations between the EU Parliament and Council."

to

    "The Directive eventually adopted by the EU will need to factor 
comments received as well as being the result of negotiations between 
the EU Parliament and Council."

Neither of these changes alters the intent and meaning of the 
responses and I suggest that they be incorporated.

Alan
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