[ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)

[Holly Raiche]

I have voted - and do not wish to change my vote

Holly
On 7 Jan 2017, at 4:07 am, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:

> A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
> 
> The 4th point currently reads:
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> 4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued improvement exercise for the benefit of end users.
> 
> I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
> 
> I am proposing that instead we say:
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> 4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
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> I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has no problem with it.
> 
> If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter their vote, that is fine.
> 
> Alan
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