[ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)
Kan Kaili
kankaili at gmail.com
Sat Jan 7 19:41:59 UTC 2017
Hi, Alan,
I have voted already, but agree with the rewording.
Kaili
----- Original Message -----
From: "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
To: "ALAC" <alac at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Sent: Saturday, January 07, 2017 1:07 AM
Subject: [ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)
>A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement
> that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement
> again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
>
> The 4th point currently reads:
>
> 4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP
> Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued
> improvement exercise for the benefit of end users.
>
> I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks
> which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
>
> I am proposing that instead we say:
>
> 4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new
> procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
>
> I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has
> no problem with it.
>
> If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At
> this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter
> their vote, that is fine.
>
> Alan
>
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