[ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)

Kan Kaili kankaili at gmail.com
Sat Jan 7 19:41:59 UTC 2017


Hi, Alan,

I have voted already, but agree with the rewording.

Kaili


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
To: "ALAC" <alac at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Sent: Saturday, January 07, 2017 1:07 AM
Subject: [ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)


>A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement 
> that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement 
> again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
> 
> The 4th point currently reads:
> 
> 4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP 
> Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued 
> improvement exercise for the benefit of end users.
> 
> I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks 
> which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
> 
> I am proposing that instead we say:
> 
> 4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new 
> procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
> 
> I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has 
> no problem with it.
> 
> If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At 
> this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter 
> their vote, that is fine.
> 
> Alan
> 
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