[ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)

[Ariel Liang]

Hello All, 

Please note that the text has been changed accordingly on the wiki. Vote credentials with additional explanatory note have been sent to the ALAC members who haven’t voted. The ones who have voted were followed up. 

Thank you,
Ariel 

On 1/6/17, 12:07 PM, "alac-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org on behalf of Alan Greenberg" <alac-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org on behalf of alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:

    A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement 
    that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement 
    again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
    
    The 4th point currently reads:
    
    4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP 
    Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued 
    improvement exercise for the benefit of end users.
    
    I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks 
    which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
    
    I am proposing that instead we say:
    
    4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new 
    procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
    
    I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has 
    no problem with it.
    
    If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At 
    this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter 
    their vote, that is fine.
    
    Alan
    
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