[ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)

[Maureen Hilyard]

Hi Alan

Although I was ok with the original statement and have voted accordingly, I
dont mind the change.

Maureen
On 6/01/2017 7:07 am, "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:

> A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement that
> is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement again and
> must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
>
> The 4th point currently reads:
>
> 4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP
> Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued improvement
> exercise for the benefit of end users.
>
> I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks
> which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
>
> I am proposing that instead we say:
>
> 4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new
> procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
>
> I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has no
> problem with it.
>
> If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At this
> point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter their vote,
> that is fine.
>
> Alan
>
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