[ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)

[Seun Ojedeji]

+1 as well

Cheers!

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Kindly excuse brevity and typos

On 6 Jan 2017 6:13 p.m., "Maureen Hilyard" <maureen.hilyard at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi Alan
>
> Although I was ok with the original statement and have voted accordingly,
> I dont mind the change.
>
> Maureen
> On 6/01/2017 7:07 am, "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
>
>> A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement
>> that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement again
>> and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
>>
>> The 4th point currently reads:
>>
>> 4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP
>> Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued improvement
>> exercise for the benefit of end users.
>>
>> I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks
>> which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
>>
>> I am proposing that instead we say:
>>
>> 4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new
>> procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
>>
>> I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has no
>> problem with it.
>>
>> If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At
>> this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter their
>> vote, that is fine.
>>
>> Alan
>>
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