<p dir="ltr">Hi Alan</p>
<p dir="ltr">Although I was ok with the original statement and have voted accordingly, I dont mind the change.</p>
<p dir="ltr">Maureen</p>
<div class="gmail_quote">On 6/01/2017 7:07 am, "Alan Greenberg" <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.<br>
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The 4th point currently reads:<br>
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4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued improvement exercise for the benefit of end users.<br>
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I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.<br>
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I am proposing that instead we say:<br>
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4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.<br>
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I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has no problem with it.<br>
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If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter their vote, that is fine.<br>
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Alan<br>
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