[ALAC] Almost final Multi-Year GA/Summit Proposal

[Holly Raiche]

Yes - we are out of time so too late.

What I hope is that, in future, any paper we prepare sticks to the suggestions made - exactly what is being asked is up front, arguments next, and conclusions that wraps it all up.  Yes, we did need to argue our points, but best do it in the way that will be read by the people we want to convince.

Holly
On 30 Apr 2016, at 7:02 pm, Maureen Hilyard <maureen.hilyard at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi all
> 
> I've said it before but not with such specificity. My recommendations:
> 
> 1. Incorporate the key ideas in the "Proposal" section into the Executive Summary 
> 
> 2. Merge the "Background" and the "importance of Face to Face" meetings into a couple of paragraphs
>  
> 3. Shorten the bullet pointed items in the "MultiYear Planning section" to key ideas only, present them after a short introduction
> 
> 4. End with the conclusion and next steps, as is :)
> 
> 3 pages MAX. (plus your graphic and annexes).  At the moment we are competing with the bylaws for quantity. 
> 
> Maureen
> 
> 
> 
> On Fri, Apr 29, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
> Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up editing (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).
> 
> Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.
> 
> Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment prior to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.
> 
> Alan
> 
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