[ALAC] URGENT: Draft Comment on CCWG Proposal - Last call for changes

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Le 21/12/2015 18:03, « Dev Anand Teelucksingh »
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écrit :

>Just to note that the lengthy comment for Recommendation 5 is cut off
>on Page 13 and possibly for Recommendation 2 on page 8 of the PDF.
>
>Dev Anand
>
>
>
>On Mon, Dec 21, 2015 at 11:57 AM, Alan Greenberg
><alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
>> This message was supposed to have been sent on Saturday evening (my
>>time)
>> but unfortunately was sent only to the IANA-Issues list.
>>
>> The original plan (as outlined below) was to try to get a majority of
>>ALAC
>> Members to ratify this prior to submission, but that is no longer
>>practical.
>> We will submit at the deadline (Monday, 21 December, 23:59 UTC)
>>factoring in
>> any corrections at the time, and ratify during the ALAC meeting
>>tomorrow.
>>
>> 
>>-------------------------------------------------------------------------
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>>
>> Attached please find the draft text for the ALAC response to the Public
>> Comment on the CCWG-Accountability 3rd Draft Proposal.
>>
>> The text is based on the answers:
>> - reviewed and revised by the IANA-Issues WG at its meetings of on 04
>> December 2015 and 11 December 2015
>> - reviewed and adjusted based on the Webinars of 16/17 December 2015
>>
>> Please review the responses and identify any errors including typos no
>>later
>> than 13:00 UTC on Monday, 21 December 2015. Earlier input will be much
>> appreciated. Once any revisions are incorporated, a final version will
>>be
>> published and a ratification vote of the ALAC will begin. The vote will
>>be
>> kept open for 2 days, but we will need sufficient votes to ensure that
>>it is
>> ratified by 23:59 UTC on 21 December 2015 when the comment is
>>officially due
>> to be submitted.
>>
>> Alan
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