[ALAC] URGENT: Draft Comment on CCWG Proposal - Last call for changes

[Dev Anand Teelucksingh]

Just to note that the lengthy comment for Recommendation 5 is cut off
on Page 13 and possibly for Recommendation 2 on page 8 of the PDF.

Dev Anand



On Mon, Dec 21, 2015 at 11:57 AM, Alan Greenberg
<alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
> This message was supposed to have been sent on Saturday evening (my time)
> but unfortunately was sent only to the IANA-Issues list.
>
> The original plan (as outlined below) was to try to get a majority of ALAC
> Members to ratify this prior to submission, but that is no longer practical.
> We will submit at the deadline (Monday, 21 December, 23:59 UTC) factoring in
> any corrections at the time, and ratify during the ALAC meeting tomorrow.
>
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Attached please find the draft text for the ALAC response to the Public
> Comment on the CCWG-Accountability 3rd Draft Proposal.
>
> The text is based on the answers:
> - reviewed and revised by the IANA-Issues WG at its meetings of on 04
> December 2015 and 11 December 2015
> - reviewed and adjusted based on the Webinars of 16/17 December 2015
>
> Please review the responses and identify any errors including typos no later
> than 13:00 UTC on Monday, 21 December 2015. Earlier input will be much
> appreciated. Once any revisions are incorporated, a final version will be
> published and a ratification vote of the ALAC will begin. The vote will be
> kept open for 2 days, but we will need sufficient votes to ensure that it is
> ratified by 23:59 UTC on 21 December 2015 when the comment is officially due
> to be submitted.
>
> Alan
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