[ALAC] ACTION: Draft of the ALAC comments to be sent to the CCWG

Alan Greenberg alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca
Mon Dec 14 20:35:36 UTC 2015


Thanks for the edits Tim. I had intended that people comment by line 
number, but in the future, if you prefer a WORD doc, just ask for a copy...

Alan

At 14/12/2015 10:01 AM, Timothy Denton wrote:
>Alan:
>Sometimes to understand a document I have to edit it.
>
>If any of these edits are of assistance to you and others, good. 
>Their purpose was merely to put into correct or comprehensible 
>English at some points where the draft text was not grammatical,  or 
>idiomatic, or where, in one case, the text was incoherent.
>
>TMD
>
>
>On 12/14/2015 1:19 AM, Alan Greenberg wrote:
>>The IANA Issues WG met on Friday to discuss possible issue on the 
>>CCWG-Accountability 3rd draft proposal.
>>
>>The CCWG documents can be founds at 
>>https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=56145016.
>>
>>The document discussed at the IANA-Issues meeting can be found 
>>linked to the Agenda Item 3 of https://community.icann.org/x/PIdlAw 
>>(entitled Review of Proposal and Potential ALAC Positions).
>>
>>We need to send a summary of our comments to the CCWG today (in 
>>time for a CCWG meeting on Tuesday at 06:00 UTC). The attached 
>>document summarizes the issues as modified by the discussion during 
>>the teleconference.
>>
>>Please send any comments in sufficient time for me to integrate 
>>them (as appropriate) into the documents. In particular, is there 
>>anything here that is counter to the tone or detail of the discussion?
>>
>>The Final Public Comment must be submitted no later than 21 
>>December. It will no doubt closely follow the attached document, 
>>but may well include other issues that come to light over the next days.
>>
>>As ALL ALAC member will be asked to vote on the Public Comments and 
>>will ultimately have to decide whether to ratify the CCWG Proposal, 
>>this is both important and time-sensitive.
>>
>>To the extent that is possible and you feel appropriate, please 
>>involve your RALOs.
>>
>>Alan
>>
>>
>>
>>
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