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Thanks for the edits Tim. I had intended that people comment by line
number, but in the future, if you prefer a WORD doc, just ask for a
copy...<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
At 14/12/2015 10:01 AM, Timothy Denton wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Alan:<br>
Sometimes to understand a document I have to edit it.<br><br>
If any of these edits are of assistance to you and others, good. Their
purpose was merely to put into correct or comprehensible English at some
points where the draft text was not grammatical, or idiomatic, or
where, in one case, the text was incoherent.<br><br>
TMD<br>
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On 12/14/2015 1:19 AM, Alan Greenberg wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">The IANA Issues WG met on Friday
to discuss possible issue on the CCWG-Accountability 3rd draft proposal.
<br><br>
The CCWG documents can be founds at
<a href="https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=56145016" eudora="autourl">
https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=56145016</a>.<br>
<br>
The document discussed at the IANA-Issues meeting can be found linked to
the Agenda Item 3 of
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/PIdlAw" eudora="autourl">
https://community.icann.org/x/PIdlAw</a> (entitled <b>Review of Proposal
and Potential ALAC Positions</b>).<br><br>
We need to send a summary of our comments to the CCWG today (in time for
a CCWG meeting on Tuesday at 06:00 UTC). The attached document summarizes
the issues as modified by the discussion during the
teleconference.<br><br>
Please send any comments in sufficient time for me to integrate them (as
appropriate) into the documents. In particular, is there anything here
that is counter to the tone or detail of the discussion?<br><br>
The Final Public Comment must be submitted no later than 21 December. It
will no doubt closely follow the attached document, but may well include
other issues that come to light over the next days.<br><br>
As ALL ALAC member will be asked to vote on the Public Comments and will
ultimately have to decide whether to ratify the CCWG Proposal, this is
both important and time-sensitive.<br><br>
To the extent that is possible and you feel appropriate, please involve
your RALOs.<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
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