[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure

[Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond]

Hello Nick,

great result! Congratulations to all involved.

I support what Heike (and others) said below, although I would humbly 
disagree on one thing.
Heike writes:

> Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer 
> interests" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"

I am unsure which of those two we wish to say - because they have different 
meanings.
If the word "groups" was used, it would effectively bound our reach to civil 
society and consumer groups.
If the word "interests" was used, this could extend to any consumer 
interests, even those outside the bound of actual consumer groups.

Which one do we wish to pursue? Or do we wish to change this sentence 
altogether to remove the ambiguity?

Many thanks,

Olivier

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Heike Jensen" <dr.heike.jensen at web.de>
To: "Discussion for At-Large Europe" <euro-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 3:04 PM
Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure


> Dear Nick,
>
> Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
> I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably 
> short and snappy.
>
> I have a few minor suggestions:
>
> Page 1:
>
> On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES 
> AND NUMBERS
> (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is 
> about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
>
> Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website 
> www.atlarge.icann.org"
>
> Page 2:
>
> Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer 
> interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
>
> Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
>
>
> These are my two cents 8-)
> Heike
>
>
> ----- Original Message ----- 
> From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart at icann.org>
> To: <euro-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
> Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
>
>
>> Dear EURALO Members:
>>
>> Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
>> teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
>> improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
>> leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
>>
>> I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
>> it looks very good.
>>
>> We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
>> to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
>> the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
>> get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
>> -- 
>> Regards,
>>
>> Nick Ashton-Hart
>> Director, At-Large
>> ICANN
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>>
>>
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