[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure

[Dragoslava Greve]

I support both Heike's and Heidi's comments. The brochure looks really good, 
well done!
Dessi

> Dear All,
> 
> Thanks for your comments, Heike. I also think the tri-fold works very well.
>  I agree with your suggested changes and would suggest the following
>  additional changes:
> 
> Page 1:
> 
> On the cover, change color of INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND
>  NUMBERS from yellow to white.
> 
> On the cover, replace the orange color (color of AFRALO) with white.
> 
> 
> Under "What people say about us":
> 
> In the quote by Christopher, replace "ALS" with "At-Large Structure".
> 
> In the quote by Christopher, 5th line, do not hyphenate "participation".
> 
> In the quote by Olivier, 3rd line, do not hyphenate "constituency".
> 
> In the quote by Veronica, insert a double quote (") at the beginning of her
>  quote.
> 
> In the quote by Wolf, 4th line, replace "understood" with "understand".
> 
> 
> Under section beginning "At-Large":
> 
> 3rd line - replace "groups" with "At-Large Structures"
> 
> 
> Page 2:
> Move heading and text under "Our Hot Issues" to top of next column where
>  these issues are outlined.
> 
> Under "Your Internet, Your Language", 3rd line, do not hyphenate "EURALO".
> 
> Under "From IPv4 to IPv6", do not hyphenate "addressing".
> 
> 
> Let me know what you think!
> 
> Kind regards,
> Heidi
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: euro-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org
>  [mailto:euro-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heike
>  Jensen Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 6:04 AM
> To: Discussion for At-Large Europe
> Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
> 
> Dear Nick,
> 
> Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
> I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably
> short and snappy.
> 
> I have a few minor suggestions:
> 
> Page 1:
> 
> On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES
> AND NUMBERS
> (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is
> about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
> 
> Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website
> www.atlarge.icann.org"
> 
> Page 2:
> 
> Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer
> interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
> 
> Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
> 
> 
> These are my two cents 8-)
> Heike
> 
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart at icann.org>
> To: <euro-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
> Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
> 
> > Dear EURALO Members:
> >
> > Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
> > teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
> > improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
> > leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
> >
> > I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
> > it looks very good.
> >
> > We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
> > to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
> > the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
> > get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
> >
> > Nick Ashton-Hart
> > Director, At-Large
> > ICANN
> > Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88
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