[Euro-board] Posted Comments to flyer in the wiki - methodology

Thu Mar 31 18:58:21 UTC 2016

Dear Wolf, and EURALO Board,

We have posted the comments on the EURALO flyer on the following wiki page:

https://community.icann.org/display/EURALO/EURALO+Flyer+-+2016

Initially  we were using  one wiki (with the 2009 flyer and current version). Kindly note that to avoid confusions as to what document should be edited we have created a new wiki page (link above ) which  includes only  the CURRENT version.  There you can see the document under in the title  :
EURALO flyer (latest version as of March 2016 ) : See PDF.

The flyer with Sebastian's edits included in the PDF is posted on the wiki as well.  You can  view the comments  easily. The comments  section down below in the wiki  includes all the emails exchanged on the flyer so far.

Wolf and Olivier, as  methodology  for this review, may I suggest that all the comments be posted on the wiki in the "comments" section and in the PDF already edited by Sebastian. In that  way it  will be easier to view edits and after all comments  are collected  you can decide to accept, edit or reject them, as appropriate.

Thank you very much!

Silvia

Silvia Vivanco
Manager, At Large Regional Affairs
ICANN | Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers
www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org>

-----Original Message-----
From: Wolf Ludwig [mailto:wolf.ludwig at comunica-ch.net]
Sent: Thursday, March 31, 2016 10:50 AM
To: Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond <ocl at gih.com>; sebastien at bachollet.com; Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco at icann.org>; euro-board at atlarge-lists.icann.org
Cc: ICANN At-Large Staff <staff at atlarge.icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Euro-board] EURALO Board Action Items posted

Dear all,

this is just to note that I agree with all points and comments from Olivier below. Thanks and

kind regards,
Wolf

Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond wrote Thu, 31 Mar 2016 12:54:
>Thanks for this Sébastien.
>
>I agree with the points you have made but let me respond to a few:
>
>"no need to have this text twice in the document"
>-> Agreed
>
>"any agreement with other European Org?"
>--> there is an agreement with EuroDIG. Nothing with RIPE nor CENTR yet.
>At this stage, as things might change, I'd prefer not to mention any
>specific agreements.
>
>end users vs. Internet users
>--> I know this is a bit of a religious discussion. The ICANN bylaws use:
>"The At-Large Advisory Committee (ALAC) is the primary organizational
>home within ICANN for individual Internet users."
>
>So Internet users is now the preferred term.
>
>No - there are not growing more than the ALS and in Europe Individual
>members are in one ALS
>--> I do not think that the text as it currently is, implies that they
>are growing at a faster rate than ALSes.
>The text is: "There are over 190 At-Large Structures (ALSes) around the
>world and a growing number of independent members."
>It just says that there is an increasing number of independent members,
>but it does not imply that they are growing at a faster rate. May
>suggest removing the ambiguity:
>"There are over 190 At-Large Structures (ALSes) around the world and a
>significant number of independent members."
>
>ISOC Chapters, capacity building org
>--> I would refrain from mentioning a specific organisation name.
>That said, the sentence needs re-writing. At present it is:
>"Whether it is an Internet-related
>consumer rights group, an academic organization, or a public-minded
>individual, we share a passion for furthering the development of ICTs
>and contributing to policies that influence the technical coordination
>of the Domain Name System."
>
>Suggestion for replacement text:
>Our membership is diverse, ranging from Internet-related consumer
>rights groups, academic organizations, computer clubs, technical
>communities, to civil society organizations.
>We share a passion for furthering the development of ICTs and
>contributing to policies that influence the technical coordination of
>the Domain Name System to better serve end users.
>
>(please note z in organisations, in line with the official calling of
>EURALO: European Regional At-Large Organization)
>
>our community of end users
>--> I don't think we need to repeat this here too. We've repeated it
>enough elsewhere on the flyer.
>
>Finally -- a sharp eye -- well done to Sébastien for spotting Lorem
>Ipsum in top right hand corner of the 2nd page.
>
>My suggestion for text there:
>
>"Our region represents a significant number of Internet users in the
>world. EURALO has a significant voice in influencing ICANN's
>multistakeholder policy development. Why don't you consider joining as
>an individual or with your organization? *The Internet is yours.*"
>
>Kindest regards,
>
>Olivier
>
>On 29/03/2016 23:56, Sébastien Bachollet wrote:
>> Hello
>> Please find attache the Euralo Flyer with my comments All the best
>> SeB
>>
>> Skills are useful but diversity is essential.
>>
>> Sébastien Bachollet
>> +33 6 07 66 89 33
>> Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/
>> Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien at bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien at bachollet.com>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Le 16/02/2016 02:40, « Silvia Vivanco »
>> <euro-board-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org on behalf of
>> silvia.vivanco at icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco at icann.org>> a écrit :
>>
>>> Dear EURALO Board members,
>>>
>>> Kindly see below the Action Items of today's call posted on the wiki
>>> page. Please review and edit as you think appropriate.
>>>
>>> Action Items:
>>>
>>>
>>> 1.      Task Force on ALS engagement, Members:  Wolf Ludwig,  Jordi
>>> Iparraguirre, Olivier Crepin Leblond.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>  *   Silvia Vivanco<https://community.icann.org/display/~silvia.vivanco>
>>> to send a call for more members to join the Taskforce.
>>>  *   Yesim Nazlar<https://community.icann.org/display/~yesim.nazlar> to
>>> create 2 new mailing list for the EURALO task forces.
>>>
>>>    2.  Task Force on review and revision of the EURALO by-Laws
>>>
>>>
>>>  *   Silvia Vivanco<https://community.icann.org/display/~silvia.vivanco>
>>> to send a call for volunteers to join the Taskforce
>>> Members: Olivier Crepin Leblond, Mikhail Medrish (who suggested to
>>> look at what the other RALOs have done), Annette Muehlberg find out
>>> if there is anything we do that is a clash with the By-laws and Wolf Ludwig.
>>>
>>>  3. EURALO flyer: Task is to update the flyers and add any new text
>>> and photos. Deadline: End of April.
>>>
>>>
>>>  *   Silvia Vivanco<https://community.icann.org/display/~silvia.vivanco>
>>> to send flyer to the EURALO Board list.
>>>
>>> Thank you!
>>>
>>> Silvia
>>>
>>>
>>> Silvia Vivanco
>>> Manager, At Large Regional Affairs
>>> ICANN | Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers
>>> www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org/<http://www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org/>>
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