[ALAC] Almost final Multi-Year GA/Summit Proposal

[Seun Ojedeji]

Okay noted with thanks!

Regards

Sent from my LG G4
Kindly excuse brevity and typos
On 30 Apr 2016 20:05, "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:

> At 30/04/2016 10:43 AM, Seun Ojedeji wrote:
>
> Thanks for the share, I recall that it was suggested to link this to the
> fact that this is also in sync with ICANN multi-year planning initiative;
> was that the intent for the last sentence in the executive summary? It may
> be good to make it more explicit than that.
>
>
> The last sentence in the Executive Summary is a(very) vague reference to
> this. The specific on is in the last paragraph of section 5 which points to
> the exact section in the budget document that addresses multi-year projects.
>
>
> Can we run this through Rinalia to get comment in regards to the volume
> because I agree as well that 7 pages may be quite a lot. While recognising
> the volume of pages, I think if we must further shorten this, then item 2
> may go completely, while items 3 and 4 can be collapsed into one as they
> are both trying to provide justification (Infact we may remove 3 and just
> leave item 4)
>
>
> Rinalia has been a part of this process. While I have no doubt there could
> be some reductions, we have pretty much run out of time.
>
> Alan
>
>
> That said, I have no strong opposition about the current status as it
> looks great and the board should be fine with it [1] but can be made better
> if indeed volume becomes a concern.
>
> Regards
> 1. Afterall the transition proposals are much more voluminous than this ;-)
> Sent from my LG G4
> Kindly excuse brevity and typos
> On 30 Apr 2016 5:56 a.m., "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca >
> wrote:
> Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up editing
> (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).
>
> Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.
>
> Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment prior
> to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.
>
> Alan
>
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