[ALAC] [IANA-issues] CCWG Proposal Comment - **REVISED**

[Alan Greenberg]

Thanks Jordan.  Alan

At 05/06/2015 02:00 AM, Jordan Carter wrote:
>hi all
>
>I'd just like to say this is a well thought out and excellent 
>contribution to the CCWG's deliberations - thank you!
>
>best
>Jordan
>
>On 5 June 2015 at 12:15, Alan Greenberg 
><<mailto:alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
>Olivier and I have reviewed the draft statement on the CCWG Proposal 
>- word by word.
>
>We have made a significant number of edits which substantially 
>improves its readability and hopefully it acceptability to the 
>community. Both of us believe that to be the case.
>
>And hopefully I have not introduced any additional typos.
>
>The Wiki has been updated - 
><https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw>https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw, 
>and both redline and clean versions are attached here for your convenience.
>
>Alan
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