[ALAC] [IANA-issues] CCWG-Accountability REVISED Draft Comment Posted.

[Alan Greenberg]

With the help of Olivier, I have revised the 
document and I hope addressed your concerns. It 
has been posted to the public comment and I will 
shortly post both the final version and a redline version to the wiki.

Alan

At 03/06/2015 06:32 PM, Tijani BEN JEMAA wrote:
>Alan,
>
>My points are very clear, and the minimum that 
>should be done is to reflect both points of 
>view, not saying “the majority believe
”. There 
>are 2 positions, so let’s put them together  (some think 
. Others believe
.).
>
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>Tijani BEN JEMAA
>Executive Director
>Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations (FMAI)
>Phone:  + 216 41 649 605
>Mobile: + 216 98 330 114
>Fax:       + 216 70 853 376
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>De : Alan Greenberg [mailto:alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca]
>Envoyé : mercredi 3 juin 2015 22:12
>À : tijani.benjemaa at planet.tn; 'ALAC'; 'IANA Issues'
>Objet : RE: [IANA-issues] CCWG-Accountability REVISED Draft Comment Posted.
>Importance : Haute
>
>Tijani, I am trying my best to reflect a fair 
>statement. My preference would be to make a 
>strong statement that reflects the majority 
>views, but people have felt strongly that all 
>variants need to be presented and I have done 
>what I could to have the statement represent all of those views.
>
>Please suggest wording that will satisfy you, 
>but it cannot be to simply remove the parts you 
>do not agree with. That removes what others feel is appropriate.
>
>We only have 3 hours before the comment period closes.
>
>Alan
>
>At 03/06/2015 03:50 PM, Tijani BEN JEMAA wrote:
>
>Thank you Alan,
>
>As you said the discussion was more between you, 
>Seun and myself, and you recognized that no 
>feedback from the rest of our members. You also 
>recognized that Seun mostly had similar position 
>than me. In short, we had 2 similar opinions and another different opinion.
>
>But unfortunately, you didn’t consider any of my 
>remarks in your last version in which you say:” 
>The ALAC believe
, the ALAC consider
.etc.” I 
>think that parts of the statement don’t 
>represent the opinion of ALAC. For the CWG 
>statement, you tried to find the middle ground, 
>in this one, you expressed your point of view. I’m sorry for that.
>
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>Tijani BEN JEMAA
>Executive Director
>Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations (FMAI)
>Phone:  + 216 41 649 605
>Mobile: + 216 98 330 114
>Fax:       + 216 70 853 376
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>
>
>
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>De : Alan Greenberg [ mailto:alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca]
>Envoyé : mercredi 3 juin 2015 15:55
>À : tijani.benjemaa at planet.tn; 'ALAC'; 'IANA Issues'
>Objet : RE: [IANA-issues] CCWG-Accountability REVISED Draft Comment Posted.
>
>There were two problems. That document should 
>not have been attached. I pointed to the wiki in 
>the e-mail. The document was from an earlier 
>e-mail that I neglected to remove. And the 21 
>May date was in error, even the first time (although no one noticed).
>
>Alan
>
>At 03/06/2015 04:24 AM, Tijani BEN JEMAA wrote:
>
>Alan,
>
>Are you sure the attached version is the last one; it was marked “21 May”.
>
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>Tijani BEN JEMAA
>Executive Director
>Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations (FMAI)
>Phone:  + 216 41 649 605
>Mobile: + 216 98 330 114
>Fax:       + 216 70 853 376
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>De : iana-issues-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org 
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><mailto:iana-issues-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org>mailto:iana-issues-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org] 
>De la part de Alan Greenberg
>Envoyé : mercredi 3 juin 2015 06:40
>À : ALAC; IANA Issues
>Objet : [IANA-issues] CCWG-Accountability REVISED Draft Comment Posted.
>Importance : Haute
>
>A revised version of the Comment has been posted 
>incorporating the issues raised in the last day. 
>See <https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw>https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw.
>
>At this point, we are having very few comments 
>made, and those that are largely a debate 
>between Tijani and me (with comments from Seun largely supporting Tijani).
>
>We REALLY need more people to contribute. A 
>statement like this needs to reflect the overall 
>community and not just the views of a few people.
>
>Alan
>
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