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[Javier Rua]

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Javier Rúa-Jovet

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> On Jan 17, 2017, at 5:01 PM, Susannah Gray <susannah.gray at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi all, 
> 
>> On 16/01/2017 10:55, Eduardo Diaz wrote:
>> I agree with the suggested change by Javier:  "We provide advice that impacts all the North American region, from Canada to the US and Puerto Rico"  (I change the word "our" for "the")
>> 
> This sentence reads slightly oddly to me. I suggest we add the word 'of' as below: 
> 
> - We provide advice that impacts all of the North American region, from Canada to the US and Puerto Rico
> 
> Otherwise, as Leah has already noted, the SF-Bay ISOC Chapter is in agreement with the new terminology. 
> 
> Kind regards, 
> 
> Susannah 
>> -ed
>> 
>>> On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 6:06 PM Javier Rua <javrua at gmail.com> wrote:
>>> I like it, although I would not describe myself as an American (or a Canadian, of course).  I would delete the phrase "We provide advice that impacts all Canadians and Americans" or rephrase it to something integrating the wording in the NARALO website like 
>>> -We provide advice that impacts all those "located in Canada, the United States or Puerto Rico" or something like 
>>> "We provide advice that impacts all our North American region, from Canada to the US and Puerto Rico"
>>> 
>>> Javier Rúa-Jovet
>>> 
>>> +1-787-396-6511
>>> twitter: @javrua
>>> skype: javier.rua1
>>> https://www.linkedin.com/in/javrua 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On Jan 12, 2017, at 9:23 PM, Alfredo Calderon <calderon.alfredo at gmail.com> wrote:
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>>>> Glenn:
>>>> 
>>>> It looks fine! I liked that you included the runnerup slogan in the initial paragraph of the mailcard.
>>>> 
>>>> Great job!
>>>> 
>>>> Sent from my "iPad Air"
>>>> 
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>>>> 
>>>> On Jan 12, 2017, at 2:52 PM, Glenn McKnight <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>> Sorry it was sent in error
>>>>> 
>>>>> The SIDE TWO  
>>>>> 
>>>>> MANY VOICES, ONE INTERNET 
>>>>> 
>>>>> NARALO Is the voice of the Internet End Users in North America. We provide advice that impacts all Canadians and Americans. NARALO is a key part of ICANN’s multi-stakeholder model. Its members work on a variety of initiatives such as, policy advice development, outreach and engagement, training, capacity building, technology and accessibility issues. Members also partner and collaborate with other key Internet governance stakeholders.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Make a Difference in how the Internet operates in North America, Come Join Us and with your help and engagement we can continue to improve NARALO and increase our voice within At Large. 
>>>>> 
>>>>> To learn more visit our website at naralo.org or email us at naralo-leadership at icann.org 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Note:   It will have a NARALO LOGO as a watermark.  
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please comment on suggestions or  edit
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks
>>>>> G
>>>>> 
>>>>> Glenn McKnight
>>>>> mcknight.glenn at gmail.com
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>>>>> .
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 1:51 PM, Glenn McKnight <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>> https://community.icann.org/display/NARALO/NARALO+Mailcard+2017
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi 
>>>>> 
>>>>> We need your feedback on the  new  NARALO Mailcard  
>>>>> 
>>>>> On side one is the  NARALO logo, colour and welcome in three languages
>>>>> 
>>>>> The reverse side has the information and call to action 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Here is the content 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Glenn McKnight
>>>>> mcknight.glenn at gmail.com
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>>>>> twitter gmcknight
>>>>> .
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