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[Eduardo Diaz]

I agree with the suggested change by Javier:  *"We provide advice that
impacts all the North American region, from Canada to the US and Puerto
Rico"  *(I change the word "our" for "the")

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On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 6:06 PM Javier Rua <javrua at gmail.com> wrote:

> I like it, although I would not describe myself as an American (or a
> Canadian, of course).  I would delete the phrase "We provide advice that
> impacts all Canadians and Americans" or rephrase it to something
> integrating the wording in the NARALO website like
> -We provide advice that impacts all those "located in Canada, the United
> States or Puerto Rico" or something like
> "We provide advice that impacts all our North American region, from Canada
> to the US and Puerto Rico"
>
> Javier Rúa-Jovet
>
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>
> On Jan 12, 2017, at 9:23 PM, Alfredo Calderon <calderon.alfredo at gmail.com>
> wrote:
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>
> Glenn:
>
> It looks fine! I liked that you included the runnerup slogan in the
> initial paragraph of the mailcard.
>
> Great job!
>
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>
> Alfredo Calderón
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>
> On Jan 12, 2017, at 2:52 PM, Glenn McKnight <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Sorry it was sent in error
>
> *The SIDE TWO  *
>
> *MANY VOICES, ONE INTERNET*
>
> NARALO Is the voice of the Internet End Users in North America. We provide
> advice that impacts all Canadians and Americans. NARALO is a key part of
> ICANN’s multi-stakeholder model. Its members work on a variety of
> initiatives such as, policy advice development, outreach and engagement,
> training, capacity building, technology and accessibility issues. Members
> also partner and collaborate with other key Internet governance
> stakeholders.
>
>
> Make a Difference in how the Internet operates in North America, Come Join
> Us and with your help and engagement we can continue to improve NARALO and
> increase our voice within At Large.
>
>
> To learn more visit our website at naralo.org or email us at
> naralo-leadership at icann.org
>
>
> Note:   It will have a NARALO LOGO as a watermark.
>
>
> Please comment on suggestions or  edit
>
>
> Thanks
>
> G
>
> Glenn McKnight
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>
> On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 1:51 PM, Glenn McKnight <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> https://community.icann.org/display/NARALO/NARALO+Mailcard+2017
>
> Hi
>
> We need your feedback on the  new  NARALO Mailcard
>
> On side one is the  NARALO logo, colour and welcome in three languages
>
> The reverse side has the information and call to action
>
> Here is the content
>
>
>
> Glenn McKnight
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