[NA-Discuss] [lac-discuss-en] REMINDER: COMMENTS REQUESTED: Proposed At-Large Vision Statement - Deadline for Comments 17 May

Thompson, Darlene DThompson1 at GOV.NU.CA
Thu May 17 18:17:57 UTC 2012


I like Cintra's wording!

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From: na-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:na-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of RJ Glass
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Subject: Re: [NA-Discuss] [lac-discuss-en] REMINDER: COMMENTS REQUESTED: Proposed At-Large Vision Statement - Deadline for Comments 17 May

I agree that it could be a bit more detailed, but I like the simplicity and think that it's fine as stated (so far).
 
 
The At-Large community catalyzes and facilitates inclusive, tangible and meaningful participation of  Internet end-users worldwide in ICANN matters, particularly through its work in strengthening the RALOs, its representation by the ALAC and its selection of the ICANN At-Large Board Member.

 
RJGlass
A at L


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From: Cintra Sooknanan <cintra.sooknanan at gmail.com>
To: ICANN At-Large Staff <staff at atlarge.icann.org>
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Subject: Re: [NA-Discuss] [lac-discuss-en] REMINDER: COMMENTS REQUESTED: Proposed At-Large Vision Statement - Deadline for Comments 17 May

Hi everyone,

Thanks for circulating this draft Vision Statement. I would have liked to see a clear plain language and easily translatable Vision. Phrases like  "brings their voice to bear in all ICANN matters" are just vague in my opinion. Vision Statements must have a mechanism of measurement as to whether they are being met or not and therefore must be precise.

Also I find it is inapt for the ALAC to be the first structure mentioned in an At Large Vision statement. Perhaps the intention is the mix the two? But I would advise against this route, and instead suggest providing a Vision Statement of ALAC separately.

My amended proposed At-Large Vision Statement is:

*      The At-Large community catalyzes and facilitates inclusive, tangible and meaningful participation of  Internet end-users worldwide in ICANN matters, particularly through its work in strengthening the RALOs, its representation by the ALAC and its selection of the ICANN At-Large Board Member.

Kind regards

Cintra Sooknanan



On Tue, May 15, 2012 at 6:12 PM, ICANN At-Large Staff < staff at atlarge.icann.org> wrote:

> Dear All,
>
>
>
> A friendly reminder that the comment period for the proposed At-Large 
> Vision Statement closes on Thursday, 17 May.
>
>
>
> The proposed At-Large Vision Statement is:
>
> *      The ALAC and At-Large community catalyzes and facilitates 
> inclusive, meaningful  participation of  Internet end-users 
> world-wide, aggregates their input and  brings their voice to bear in 
> all ICANN matters.
>
>
>
> Please use the comments function on this 
> <https://community.icann.org/x/esPbAQ> wiki page to add any 
> suggestions or send your comments to At-Large Staff at:  
> <mailto:staff at atlarge.icann.org> staff at atlarge.icann.org.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Heidi Ullrich, Silvia Vivanco, Matt Ashtiani, Gisella Gruber, and 
> Nathalie Peregrine
>
> ICANN Policy Staff in support of ALAC
>
> E-mail:  <mailto:staff at atlarge.icann.org> staff at atlarge.icann.org
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> From: ICANN At-Large Staff [mailto:staff at atlarge.icann.org]
> Sent: Friday, May 04, 2012 2:10 PM
> To: alac-announce at atlarge-lists.icann.org;
> 'afri-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org'; apralo; Discussion for 
> At-Large Europe; LACRALO discussion list; 
> 'lac-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org';
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> Cc: 'Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond'; 'Cheryl Langdon-Orr'; ICANN At-Large 
> Staff
> Subject: COMMENTS REQUESTED: Proposed At-Large Vision Statement
>
>
>
> Dear All,
>
>
>
> The ALAC Improvements Review WG Final Report included a recommendation 
> that "the ALAC should develop strategic and operational planning 
> processes (including performance criteria and cost information) as 
> part of ICANN's planning process." (Recommendation 5 
> <https://community.icann.org/display/Improve/Recommendation+5> ).
>
>
>
> As part of the implementation of this recommendation, the At-Large 
> Improvements Implementation Work Team C created an action item to 
> "articulate ALAC's and At-Large's vision and mission."
>
>
>
> The At-Large Improvements Taskforce developed a proposed At-Large 
> Vision Statement during their meeting at the 43rd ICANN Meeting in Costa Rica.
>
>
>
> The proposed At-Large Vision Statement is:
>
> .        The ALAC and At-Large community catalyzes and facilitates 
> inclusive, meaningful  participation of  Internet end-users 
> world-wide, aggregates their input and  brings their voice to bear in 
> all ICANN matters.
>
>
>
>
> Olivier Crepin-Leblond, Chair of the ALAC, and Cheryl Langdon-Orr, 
> Chair of the At-Large Improvements Taskforce, have outlined the 
> following next steps for the proposed At-Large Vision Statement:
>
> .        4-17 May 2012 - This proposed At-Large Vision statement is 
> open for comments between 4-17 May 2012. Please use the comments 
> function on this wiki page <https://community.icann.org/x/esPbAQ>  to 
> add any suggestions or send your comments to At-Large Staff at: 
> staff at atlarge.icann.org.
>
> .        21 May 2012 - The At-Large Improvements Taskforce will review 
> and incorporate comments received during their 21 May meeting.
>
> .        22 May 2012 - The ALAC will review the proposed At-Large 
> Vision Statement during their 22 May ALAC meeting and vote whether to ratify it.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Heidi Ullrich, Silvia Vivanco, Matt Ashtiani, Gisella Gruber, and 
> Nathalie Peregrine
>
> ICANN Policy Staff in support of ALAC
>
> E-mail: staff at atlarge.icann.org
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