[At-Large] Fwd: ATRT Final report and recommendations as sent to the ICANN Board.

Sun Jan 2 04:40:25 UTC 2011

Got it, thanks.

Antony

On Dec 31, 2010, at 8:26 PM, Cheryl Langdon-Orr wrote:

> Public and the ICANN Community had a chance to comment on the
> recommendations that went into the report (resulting as noted in the body
> text on some modifications / clarifications  and edits to these
> recommendations) already  (that PC was pre Cartagena meeting ending the
> Friday before the meeting started)   this report is under the terms of the
> AoC for the Board  to read, react and respond to...
> 
> 
> Cheryl Langdon-Orr
> (CLO)
> 
> 
> 
> On 1 January 2011 14:14, Antony Van Couvering <avc at namesatwork.com> wrote:
> 
>> Thank you Cheryl.  Will the public have an opportunity to comment on this
>> report?
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> 
>> Antony
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On Dec 31, 2010, at 3:21 PM, Cheryl Langdon-Orr wrote:
>> 
>>> In advance of more formal publication of the attached document please
>> find,
>>> FYI, the Final Report and Recommendations of the Accountability
>>> and Transparency Review Team sent a short while ago to the ICANN Board...
>>> 
>>> Staff can be post this to our usual announce and relevant lists please
>> and
>>> insert it in the ATRT Wiki page we set up at the beginning of this
>> process.
>>> 
>>> It has been my honor and privilege to serve as your ALAC representative
>> on
>>> this inaugural ATRT post AoC;  I also trust you will be well satisfied
>> with
>>> the outcomes we were able to establish, and see this as an important
>>> foundation for the work of the next ATRT and in the improvement of
>> ICANN's
>>> A&T...
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Cheryl Langdon-Orr
>>> (CLO)
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>> From: Brian Cute <brianacute at gmail.com>
>>> Date: 1 January 2011 04:32
>>> Subject: Re: Latest draft
>>> To: olivier.muron at orange-ftgroup.com
>>> Cc: manal at tra.gov.eg, ceo at auda.org.au, jbladel at godaddy.com,
>>> langdonorr at gmail.com, zhangxinsheng at miit.gov.cn, eiriarte at alfa-redi.org,
>>> lstrickling at ntia.doc.gov, wadelman at godaddy.com,
>>> peter.dengatethrush at icann.org, caffsouza at gmail.com,
>> falexander at ntia.doc.gov,
>>> guofeng at catr.cn, fabio at colasanti.it, chrisdisspain888 at msn.com,
>>> alice.jansen at icann.org, olof.nordling at icann.org, louienet at gmail.com
>>> 
>>> 
>>> RT,
>>> 
>>> The Final Recommendations have just been sent to the Board and are
>> attached
>>> here.  Alice, could you please see that this is posted promptly to the
>> ICANN
>>> website (as an Announcement) and to the AoC site as well.
>>> 
>>> Thanks to all for the great work in the last week!  It's not perfect, but
>> it
>>> is in good shape thanks to your efforts.  It has been and honor and a
>>> pleasure to work with all of you.  Have a very Happy New Year!
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> Brian
>>> 
>>> On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 8:06 AM, <olivier.muron at orange-ftgroup.com>
>> wrote:
>>> 
>>>> I find the final draft very fine!
>>>> 
>>>> A small edit page 67: the face-to-face meeting was held on October
>> 11-13,
>>>> 2010 and not 2007
>>>> 
>>>> Happy New Year to all of you.
>>>> 
>>>> Olivier
>>>> (just back in Paris after a US vacation prolongated by the snow)
>>>> ------------------------------
>>>> *De :* Louie Lee [mailto:louienet at gmail.com]
>>>> *Envoyé :* vendredi 31 décembre 2010 10:02
>>>> *À :* Brian Cute
>>>> *Cc :* Manal Ismail; Chris Disspain; JamesM. Bladel; Cheryl Langdon-Orr;
>>>> ZHANG Xinsheng; Erick Iriarte Iriarte Ahon; MURON Olivier RD-DIR-ISS;
>>>> Lawrence E. Strickling; Warren Adelman; Peter Dengate Thrush; Carlos
>> Affonso
>>>> Pereira de Souza; Fiona Alexander; guo; Fabio Colasanti;
>>>> chrisdisspain888 at msn.com; Alice Jansen; Olof Nordling
>>>> *Objet :* Re: Latest draft
>>>> 
>>>> No glaring error!  Just need some line justification adjustments here
>>>> and there.
>>>> 
>>>> If you want to correct a word for me....
>>>> The "member" in "Independent Expert team member" in my Appendix text
>> should
>>>> be plural: members.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you!
>>>> 
>>>> Louie
>>>> --
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On Dec 30, 2010, at 10:12 PM, Brian Cute <brianacute at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> FINAL DRAFT ATTACHED - 2 more edits to go.
>>>> 
>>>> I have two tasks for the morning:
>>>> 
>>>> 1.  Revise the page numbers in the footnotes referencing the Berkman
>> Center
>>>> report since the pagination has changed.
>>>> 
>>>> 2.  Resolve the issue of the missing footnote text for 3 footnotes.
>>>> 
>>>> Beyond that I believe I have captured most of the suggested edits.  IF
>> YOU
>>>> SEE A GLARING ERROR, PLEASE CALL IT TO MY ATTENTION.
>>>> 
>>>> Once I have addressed #1 and 2 above, I will send the final PDF version
>> to
>>>> Alice and Olof for posting.
>>>> 
>>>> Regards,
>>>> Brian
>>>> 
>>>> 2010/12/30 Brian Cute < <brianacute at gmail.com>brianacute at gmail.com>
>>>> 
>>>>> RT,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Attached is the latest version.  I have been maintaining my own version
>> of
>>>>> the "master" document and have now integrated the comments from Larry
>> and a
>>>>> couple of substantive edits from Louie (Appendix A) and Cheryl
>>>>> (Recommendation 19).  I am still adding some of the grammar and
>> formatting
>>>>> edits from Louie and Cheryl.  I also added an edit to Appendix A re:
>>>>> Management of Public Comments.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please provide feedback on the following:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 1.  Currently, the "priority recommendations are listed as # 7, 9, 10,
>> 11,
>>>>> 15, 16, 17 and 23.  PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU AGREE WITH THIS LIST.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 2.  Let me know if I have missed substantive edits you provided in the
>>>>> last few days.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please note the following:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 1. I have asked Denise Michel and Alice for assistance in getting links
>> to
>>>>> the documents for the 2 missing footnotes (James is assisting on one as
>>>>> well.)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 2.  I will do a final edit of all the footnotes and a spell check.
>>>>> 
>>>>> If there are any other items, please send me edits now.  I intend to
>> send
>>>>> this to the Board no later than tomorrow morning U.S. EST.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks all for your focus on getting this document finished.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Regards,
>>>>> Brian
>>>>> P.S.  As requested, Chris is copied above on his <http://msn.com/
>>> msn.comemail.
>>>>> 2010/12/30 Manal Ismail < <manal at tra.gov.eg>manal at tra.gov.eg>
>>>>> 
>>>>> Brian ..
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I thought it's worth bringing to your attention that the version Louie
>>>>>> commented on (the latest) is different from the version Larry
>> commented on
>>>>>> ..
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> --Manal
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> ________________________________
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> من: Louie Lee [mailto: <louienet at gmail.com>louienet at gmail.com]
>>>>>> تاريخ الإرسال: الخميس 30/12/2010 05:41 ص
>>>>>> إلى: Manal Ismail; Brian Cute
>>>>>> نسخة: Chris Disspain; James M. Bladel; Cheryl Langdon-Orr; ZHANG
>>>>>> Xinsheng; Erick Iriarte Iriarte Ahon; Olivier Muron; Lawrence E.
>> Strickling;
>>>>>> Warren Adelman; Peter Dengate Thrush; Carlos Affonso Pereira de Souza;
>> Fiona
>>>>>> Alexander; guo; Fabio Colasanti
>>>>>> الموضوع: Re: Latest draft
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Err.... and here's the attachment. :)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> <ATRTFinalRecommendations.doc>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
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