[AFRI-Discuss] Draft Statement for AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting in Abu Dhabi (ICANN 60)

[Raymond Mamattah]

Hello Sarah,

We have received 3 corrections to the draft statement so far, out of which
I have even seen some errors again, for example, paragraph 2 line 2, the
last word shows Possible, with a capital P, this is a simple typographical
error.

I suggest that AFRALO-AfrICANN should have a Media/Publicity Committee,
made up of volunteers. There are several tools that the volunteers can use
to work together without necessarily meeting physically.  With this
committee, any release will be rigorously discussed at that level and
necessary corrections will be made before it comes out.  It will also save
us the trouble of having to receive several corrections to our release from
individuals.

I offer myself to volunteer as part of this committee if considered.

Regards,
Raymond Selorm Mamattah
Accra, Ghana

On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam at hotmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi Sarah,
>
> Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify
> tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc.
>
> Kind Regards
> Bram
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss <
> afri-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
>
> Dear Sarah et al,
>
> Please find my comments attached in documents.
>
> Kind regards
>
> Beran
>
> On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Dear colleagues,
>
> I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement
> for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November
> 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was
> General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
>
> As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to
> write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get
> back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final
> comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
>
> We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani
> Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to
> drafting this statement.
>
> Kind regards,
>
>
> Sarah
>
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