[RAA-WG] Fourth possibly final draft of RAA comments

[John L]

I took another whack.  Other than fixing lots of typos, main changes are:

- beginning clarifies that this is from the RAA WG

- added the beneficiary language bullet from Bret

- removed transfer timeout language, since it already does that

- added a few words to acknowledge things ICANN already (at least in 
theory) does

I didn't reinstate the WHOIS privacy stuff since I saw only one comment 
asking for it.  But the section on resellers does say that registrars 
should have contracts that pass through all registrant responsibilities, 
which covers the most important point, I think.

Regards,
John Levine, johnl at iecc.com, Primary Perpetrator of "The Internet for Dummies",
Information Superhighwayman wanna-be, http://www.johnlevine.com, ex-Mayor
"More Wiener schnitzel, please", said Tom, revealingly.
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