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On Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 4:09 PM Susannah Gray <susannah.gray at gmail.com>
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> On 16/01/2017 10:55, Eduardo Diaz
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> *"We provide advice that impacts all the North American region, from
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> This sentence reads slightly oddly to me. I suggest we add the word
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> *We provide advice that impacts all of the North American region, from
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> Otherwise, as Leah has already noted, the SF-Bay ISOC Chapter is in
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> On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 6:06 PM Javier Rua <javrua at gmail.com>
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> I like it, although I would not
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> Javier Rúa-Jovet
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> On Jan 12, 2017, at 9:23 PM, Alfredo Calderon <calderon.alfredo at gmail.com>
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> Glenn:
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> It looks fine! I liked that you
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> Great job!
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> On Jan 12, 2017, at 2:52 PM, Glenn McKnight <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>
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> *The SIDE TWO  *
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> *MANY VOICES, ONE INTERNET*
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> NARALO Is the voice of the
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> Internet End Users in North America. We
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> and Americans. NARALO is a key part of
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> ICANN’s multi-stakeholder model. Its members
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> North America, Come Join Us and with your
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> On Thu, Jan 12,
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> 2017 at 1:51 PM, Glenn McKnight <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>
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> https://community.icann.org/display/NARALO/NARALO+Mailcard+2017
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> Hi
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> We need your feedback
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