[NA-Discuss] MOU in San Juan (Action Items)

[Nick Ashton-Hart]

On 15 Jun 2007, at 18:58, Sylvia Caras wrote:

> People Who will sign whatever is agreed on.  (We usually need about 14
> months notice to schedule travel.)
>

If you look at the page www.icann.org/meetings and look for the next  
North American meeting AFTER Los Angeles, that will be the next time  
the whole NA region will be invited with travel support to an  
International ICANN meeting - if that helps you plan travel.

> Three copy-edit comments:
>
> 4. 8 'should' - this is a responsibility of ICANN - I think a better
> verb would to be 'will' or 'must'
>

I believe ICANN will agree to that provided the phrase 'and clearly  
explain how it will address them' is deleted.

This is not because the board doesn't want to reply, it is because  
this clause would require it to reply to absolutely every comment  
which was made; the administrative burden of doing that could damange  
the ability of the board to do its job.

> 5. 3 change 'encourage' to 'encouraging'
>
> 6.3 ... when signed by all parties writing. ... Either party - if
> there are only two parties then I suggest changing 'all' to 'both'  If
> there are more than two parties, the word 'either' usually refers to
> only two
>

Well, there is one party on one side, the other party is a group of  
groups - so I think it is OK as written.

> Sylvia
>
> Sylvia Caras
> People Who
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