[NA-Discuss] MAILCARD Feedbacl
Susannah Gray
susannah.gray at gmail.com
Tue Jan 17 21:01:26 UTC 2017
Hi all,
On 16/01/2017 10:55, Eduardo Diaz wrote:
> I agree with the suggested change by Javier: /"We provide advice that
> impacts all the North American region, from Canada to the US and
> Puerto Rico" /(I change the word "our" for "the")
> */
> /*
This sentence reads slightly oddly to me. I suggest we add the word 'of'
as below:
- /We provide advice that impacts all of the North American region, from
Canada to the US and Puerto Rico/
Otherwise, as Leah has already noted, the SF-Bay ISOC Chapter is in
agreement with the new terminology.
Kind regards,
Susannah
> -ed
>
> On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 6:06 PM Javier Rua <javrua at gmail.com
> <mailto:javrua at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> I like it, although I would not describe myself as an American (or
> a Canadian, of course). I would delete the phrase "We provide
> advice that impacts all Canadians and Americans" or rephrase it to
> something integrating the wording in the NARALO website like
> -We provide advice that impacts all those "located in Canada, the
> United States or Puerto Rico" or something like
> "We provide advice that impacts all our North American region,
> from Canada to the US and Puerto Rico"
>
> Javier Rúa-Jovet
>
> +1-787-396-6511 <tel:%28787%29%20396-6511>
> twitter: @javrua
> skype: javier.rua1
> https://www.linkedin.com/in/javrua
>
>
> On Jan 12, 2017, at 9:23 PM, Alfredo Calderon
> <calderon.alfredo at gmail.com <mailto:calderon.alfredo at gmail.com>>
> wrote:
>
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>>
>> Glenn:
>>
>> It looks fine! I liked that you included the runnerup slogan in
>> the initial paragraph of the mailcard.
>>
>> Great job!
>>
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>>
>> Alfredo Calderón
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>> On Jan 12, 2017, at 2:52 PM, Glenn McKnight
>> <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com <mailto:mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>
>>> Sorry it was sent in error
>>>
>>> *_The SIDE TWO _*
>>>
>>> *MANY VOICES, ONE INTERNET*
>>>
>>> NARALO Is the voice of the Internet End Users in North America.
>>> We provide advice that impacts all Canadians and Americans.
>>> NARALO is a key part of ICANN’s multi-stakeholder model. Its
>>> members work on a variety of initiatives such as, policy advice
>>> development, outreach and engagement, training, capacity
>>> building, technology and accessibility issues. Members also
>>> partner and collaborate with other key Internet governance
>>> stakeholders.
>>>
>>> *
>>> *
>>>
>>> Make a Difference in how the Internet operates in North America,
>>> Come Join Us and with your help and engagement we can continue
>>> to improve NARALO and increase our voice within At Large.
>>>
>>> *
>>> *
>>>
>>> To learn more visit our website at naralo.org
>>> <http://naralo.org/> or email us at naralo-leadership at icann.org
>>> <mailto:naralo-leadership at icann.org>
>>>
>>>
>>> Note: It will have a NARALO LOGO as a watermark.
>>>
>>>
>>> Please comment on suggestions or edit
>>>
>>>
>>> Thanks
>>>
>>> G
>>>
>>>
>>> Glenn McKnight
>>> mcknight.glenn at gmail.com <mailto:mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>
>>> skype gmcknight
>>> twitter gmcknight
>>> .
>>>
>>> On Thu, Jan 12, 2017 at 1:51 PM, Glenn McKnight
>>> <mcknight.glenn at gmail.com <mailto:mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>
>>> https://community.icann.org/display/NARALO/NARALO+Mailcard+2017
>>>
>>> Hi
>>>
>>> We need your feedback on the new NARALO Mailcard
>>>
>>> On side one is the NARALO logo, colour and welcome in three
>>> languages
>>>
>>> The reverse side has the information and call to action
>>>
>>> Here is the content
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Glenn McKnight
>>> mcknight.glenn at gmail.com <mailto:mcknight.glenn at gmail.com>
>>> skype gmcknight
>>> twitter gmcknight
>>> .
>>>
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