[lac-discuss-en] [Fwd: Re: [GTLD-WG] Proposed revised comment on Application Guidebook V2]

[Dev Anand Teelucksingh]

Latest version of  At-Large Statement on 2nd draft of the gTLD 
Application Guidebook :
https://st.icann.org/working-groups/index.cgi?at_large_gtld_working_group_statement_on_applicant_guidebook_v2

Dev T



-------- Original Message --------
Subject: 	Re: [GTLD-WG] Proposed revised comment on Application 
Guidebook V2
Date: 	Sun, 12 Apr 2009 02:56:04 -0400
From: 	Evan Leibovitch <evan at telly.org>
To: 	gtld-wg at atlarge-lists.icann.org <gtld-wg at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
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Hello everyone,

I have made two changes to the the statement, in accordance with Hong's
comments.

One change is to a sentence in the section on String Contention, the
other is the addition of two sentences to the section on Legal Rights.
The changes do not significantly alter the position of the document,
rather they clarify and strengthen the existing statement.

I hope I have expressed Hong's comments appropriately in the new
wording, and that the result is acceptable to the WG.

Please review as soon as possible.

A side-by-side view of the changes is available at this URL
<https://st.icann.org/working-groups/index.cgi?action=revision_compare&page_name=at_large_gtld_working_group_statement_on_applicant_guidebook_v2&mode=source&new_revision_id=20090412064617&old_revision_id=20090411162329>:
https://st.icann.org/working-groups/index.cgi?action=revision_compare&page_name=at_large_gtld_working_group_statement_on_applicant_guidebook_v2&mode=source&new_revision_id=20090412064617&old_revision_id=20090411162329

The newest revision is available at
https://st.icann.org/working-groups/index.cgi?at_large_gtld_working_group_statement_on_applicant_guidebook_v2

- Evan

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