[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure

[Heidi Ullrich]

Dear All, 

Thanks for your comments, Heike. I also think the tri-fold works very well. I agree with your suggested changes and would suggest the following additional changes: 

Page 1: 

On the cover, change color of INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS from yellow to white. 

On the cover, replace the orange color (color of AFRALO) with white. 


Under "What people say about us": 

In the quote by Christopher, replace "ALS" with "At-Large Structure".

In the quote by Christopher, 5th line, do not hyphenate "participation".

In the quote by Olivier, 3rd line, do not hyphenate "constituency".

In the quote by Veronica, insert a double quote (") at the beginning of her quote. 

In the quote by Wolf, 4th line, replace "understood" with "understand". 


Under section beginning "At-Large":

3rd line - replace "groups" with "At-Large Structures"


Page 2: 
Move heading and text under "Our Hot Issues" to top of next column where these issues are outlined. 

Under "Your Internet, Your Language", 3rd line, do not hyphenate "EURALO". 

Under "From IPv4 to IPv6", do not hyphenate "addressing". 


Let me know what you think!

Kind regards,
Heidi 


-----Original Message-----
From: euro-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:euro-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heike Jensen
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 6:04 AM
To: Discussion for At-Large Europe
Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure

Dear Nick,

Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably 
short and snappy.

I have a few minor suggestions:

Page 1:

On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES 
AND NUMBERS
(this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is 
about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).

Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website 
www.atlarge.icann.org"

Page 2:

Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer 
interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"

Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"


These are my two cents 8-)
Heike


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart at icann.org>
To: <euro-discuss at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure


> Dear EURALO Members:
>
> Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
> teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
> improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
> leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
>
> I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
> it looks very good.
>
> We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
> to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
> the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
> get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
> -- 
> Regards,
>
> Nick Ashton-Hart
> Director, At-Large
> ICANN
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