[At-Large] GNSO Improvements Statement Edits

[Brendler, Beau]

I'm closer to supporting this than anything else I've seen yet.

Danny, Evan, what do you think (the document is a little difficult to read as it's very wide, I'm referring to Nick's revisions on the right).

BB


-----Original Message-----
From: alac-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org on behalf of Nick Ashton-Hart
Sent: Sat 4/26/2008 11:24 AM
To: At-Large Worldwide; NA Discuss
Subject: [At-Large] GNSO Improvements Statement Edits
 
Dear All:

I have been requested to provide some language which might act as a 'bridge' which could help to reconcile the views expressed about the Joint Proposal on GNSO Reform which has been the subject of considerable discussion in the NARALO in the last several days.

I hope that what I have crafted is at least close to what is required. As always, whether it is used or not is entirely up to all of you.

I have taken the liberty of doing the drafting using the wiki version of the ALAC Statement to the Board of ICANN on GNSO Improvements, since it seemed to me that this would make it easy for everyone to see the original text of that document and also the changes that I have introduced, Here are some URLs for you:

1. Side-by-side view of the original ALAC draft and the drafting work just done: https://st.icann.org/alac-docs/index.cgi?action=revision_compare&page_name=al_alac_gnim_wg_01_01_alac_statement_on_gnso_improvements&mode=source&new_revision_id=20080426152144&old_revision_id=20080423215537&Button=Compare+Revisions

2. Original text of the ALAC Statement, unmodified: https://st.icann.org/alac-docs/index.cgi?action=revision_view;page_name=al_alac_gnim_wg_01_01_alac_statement_on_gnso_improvements;revision_id=20080423215537

3. Joint Proposal of Users: http://forum.icann.org/lists/gnso-improvements-report-2008/docTwl3R0M9fY.doc

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