[At-Large] Fwd: ATRT Final report and recommendations as sent to the ICANN Board.

Sat Jan 1 03:14:11 UTC 2011

Thank you Cheryl.  Will the public have an opportunity to comment on this report?

Best regards,

Antony

On Dec 31, 2010, at 3:21 PM, Cheryl Langdon-Orr wrote:

> In advance of more formal publication of the attached document please find,
> FYI, the Final Report and Recommendations of the Accountability
> and Transparency Review Team sent a short while ago to the ICANN Board...
> 
> Staff can be post this to our usual announce and relevant lists please and
> insert it in the ATRT Wiki page we set up at the beginning of this process.
> 
> It has been my honor and privilege to serve as your ALAC representative on
> this inaugural ATRT post AoC;  I also trust you will be well satisfied with
> the outcomes we were able to establish, and see this as an important
> foundation for the work of the next ATRT and in the improvement of ICANN's
> A&T...
> 
> 
> Cheryl Langdon-Orr
> (CLO)
> 
> 
> 
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: Brian Cute <brianacute at gmail.com>
> Date: 1 January 2011 04:32
> Subject: Re: Latest draft
> To: olivier.muron at orange-ftgroup.com
> Cc: manal at tra.gov.eg, ceo at auda.org.au, jbladel at godaddy.com,
> langdonorr at gmail.com, zhangxinsheng at miit.gov.cn, eiriarte at alfa-redi.org,
> lstrickling at ntia.doc.gov, wadelman at godaddy.com,
> peter.dengatethrush at icann.org, caffsouza at gmail.com, falexander at ntia.doc.gov,
> guofeng at catr.cn, fabio at colasanti.it, chrisdisspain888 at msn.com,
> alice.jansen at icann.org, olof.nordling at icann.org, louienet at gmail.com
> 
> 
> RT,
> 
> The Final Recommendations have just been sent to the Board and are attached
> here.  Alice, could you please see that this is posted promptly to the ICANN
> website (as an Announcement) and to the AoC site as well.
> 
> Thanks to all for the great work in the last week!  It's not perfect, but it
> is in good shape thanks to your efforts.  It has been and honor and a
> pleasure to work with all of you.  Have a very Happy New Year!
> 
> Best regards,
> Brian
> 
> On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 8:06 AM, <olivier.muron at orange-ftgroup.com> wrote:
> 
>> I find the final draft very fine!
>> 
>> A small edit page 67: the face-to-face meeting was held on October 11-13,
>> 2010 and not 2007
>> 
>> Happy New Year to all of you.
>> 
>> Olivier
>> (just back in Paris after a US vacation prolongated by the snow)
>> ------------------------------
>> *De :* Louie Lee [mailto:louienet at gmail.com]
>> *Envoyé :* vendredi 31 décembre 2010 10:02
>> *À :* Brian Cute
>> *Cc :* Manal Ismail; Chris Disspain; JamesM. Bladel; Cheryl Langdon-Orr;
>> ZHANG Xinsheng; Erick Iriarte Iriarte Ahon; MURON Olivier RD-DIR-ISS;
>> Lawrence E. Strickling; Warren Adelman; Peter Dengate Thrush; Carlos Affonso
>> Pereira de Souza; Fiona Alexander; guo; Fabio Colasanti;
>> chrisdisspain888 at msn.com; Alice Jansen; Olof Nordling
>> *Objet :* Re: Latest draft
>> 
>>  No glaring error!  Just need some line justification adjustments here
>> and there.
>> 
>> If you want to correct a word for me....
>> The "member" in "Independent Expert team member" in my Appendix text should
>> be plural: members.
>> 
>> Thank you!
>> 
>> Louie
>> --
>> 
>> 
>> On Dec 30, 2010, at 10:12 PM, Brian Cute <brianacute at gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>>  FINAL DRAFT ATTACHED - 2 more edits to go.
>> 
>> I have two tasks for the morning:
>> 
>> 1.  Revise the page numbers in the footnotes referencing the Berkman Center
>> report since the pagination has changed.
>> 
>> 2.  Resolve the issue of the missing footnote text for 3 footnotes.
>> 
>> Beyond that I believe I have captured most of the suggested edits.  IF YOU
>> SEE A GLARING ERROR, PLEASE CALL IT TO MY ATTENTION.
>> 
>> Once I have addressed #1 and 2 above, I will send the final PDF version to
>> Alice and Olof for posting.
>> 
>> Regards,
>> Brian
>> 
>> 2010/12/30 Brian Cute < <brianacute at gmail.com>brianacute at gmail.com>
>> 
>>> RT,
>>> 
>>> Attached is the latest version.  I have been maintaining my own version of
>>> the "master" document and have now integrated the comments from Larry and a
>>> couple of substantive edits from Louie (Appendix A) and Cheryl
>>> (Recommendation 19).  I am still adding some of the grammar and formatting
>>> edits from Louie and Cheryl.  I also added an edit to Appendix A re:
>>> Management of Public Comments.
>>> 
>>> Please provide feedback on the following:
>>> 
>>> 1.  Currently, the "priority recommendations are listed as # 7, 9, 10, 11,
>>> 15, 16, 17 and 23.  PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU AGREE WITH THIS LIST.
>>> 
>>> 2.  Let me know if I have missed substantive edits you provided in the
>>> last few days.
>>> 
>>> Please note the following:
>>> 
>>> 1. I have asked Denise Michel and Alice for assistance in getting links to
>>> the documents for the 2 missing footnotes (James is assisting on one as
>>> well.)
>>> 
>>> 2.  I will do a final edit of all the footnotes and a spell check.
>>> 
>>> If there are any other items, please send me edits now.  I intend to send
>>> this to the Board no later than tomorrow morning U.S. EST.
>>> 
>>> Thanks all for your focus on getting this document finished.
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Brian
>>> P.S.  As requested, Chris is copied above on his <http://msn.com/>msn.comemail.
>>> 2010/12/30 Manal Ismail < <manal at tra.gov.eg>manal at tra.gov.eg>
>>> 
>>> Brian ..
>>>> 
>>>> I thought it's worth bringing to your attention that the version Louie
>>>> commented on (the latest) is different from the version Larry commented on
>>>> ..
>>>> 
>>>> --Manal
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> ________________________________
>>>> 
>>>> من: Louie Lee [mailto: <louienet at gmail.com>louienet at gmail.com]
>>>> تاريخ الإرسال: الخميس 30/12/2010 05:41 ص
>>>> إلى: Manal Ismail; Brian Cute
>>>> نسخة: Chris Disspain; James M. Bladel; Cheryl Langdon-Orr; ZHANG
>>>> Xinsheng; Erick Iriarte Iriarte Ahon; Olivier Muron; Lawrence E. Strickling;
>>>> Warren Adelman; Peter Dengate Thrush; Carlos Affonso Pereira de Souza; Fiona
>>>> Alexander; guo; Fabio Colasanti
>>>> الموضوع: Re: Latest draft
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Err.... and here's the attachment. :)
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
>> <ATRTFinalRecommendations.doc>
>> 
>> 
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