<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;">Evin<div><br></div><div>First, this does lead to the accreditation link - and with it, my comments.</div><div><br></div><div>That said, I am not sure how many times I have to ask, but PLEASE, EVERYTHING that we are seeking comments on should be on the policy page. Have you checked the ALAC policy page? Is the issue there? And why not? You cannot keep asking people to comment and just give them a link to a wiki. They may not be able to comment at that moment, but then want to go back and have to hunt for the relevant meal - and they should not have to. I don’t know how many times I have to ask, and why it is continually being ignored. but the aim is to make it easy for people to comment on policy. So there should be a one stop shop - people should have ONE please where they can regularly check. </div><div><br></div><div>Heidi - why am I saying this again. And why is it not happening. There is a policy group that - hopefully - will be contributing to the formulation of policy. There should be ONE place - the policy page - where they go. And I sincerely hope not to have to ask for this again</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Holly<br><div><div>On 4 May 2018, at 9:32 pm, Evin Erdogdu <<a href="mailto:evin.erdogdu@icann.org">evin.erdogdu@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div bgcolor="white" lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple" style="font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Dear Holly,<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I touched based with Jonathan, and we believe you are referencing a statement related to the previous Article 29 thread.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Jonathan will be drafting a statement, hopefully within the next hour or so.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Many thanks,<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Evin<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><b><span style="font-size: 12pt;">From:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Holly Raiche <<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</a>><br><b>Date:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Friday, May 4, 2018 at 2:24 PM<br><b>To:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Evin Erdogdu <<a href="mailto:evin.erdogdu@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">evin.erdogdu@icann.org</a>><br><b>Cc:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>ALAC <<a href="mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>[Ext] Re: Correction Deadline Today 16:00 UTC - REMINDER / WHOIS Accreditation and Access Model v1.4<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Hi Evin<o:p></o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Can you find the earlier wiki page for this discussion. Jonathan drafted a response which is very close to what we can all agree on and it would be really helpful if that can be put into the First Draft space. I certainly take Leon’s point; it is really important that views other than the IPC/BC are put forward - particularly from ALAC<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">So I’d very much appreciate it if you could find Jonathan’s contribution and post it - <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Thanks<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Holly<o:p></o:p></div><div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">On 4 May 2018, at 9:16 pm, Evin Erdogdu <<a href="mailto:evin.erdogdu@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">evin.erdogdu@icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><br><br><o:p></o:p></div><blockquote style="margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Please note the deadline is today at 16:00 UTC.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Evin<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><b><span style="font-size: 12pt;">From:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Evin Erdogdu <<a href="mailto:evin.erdogdu@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">evin.erdogdu@icann.org</span></a>><br><b>Date:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Friday, May 4, 2018 at 1:35 PM<br><b>To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</span></a>>, ALAC List <<a href="mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org</span></a>>, "<a href="mailto:JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org</span></a>>, Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</span></a>>, ICANN At-Large Staff <<a href="mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">staff@atlarge.icann.org</span></a>><br><b>Subject:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>REMINDER - Today / WHOIS Accreditation and Access Model v1.4</span><o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">A kind reminder today (04 May 2018 at 23:59 UTC) is the deadline for requested feedback on the<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D84213851&d=DwMF-g&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=HedNXfBayuWxdPer7COiCJBd39KxvJQIgCaiDYF2Tm8&m=J6Bs6Ufrfni4JROU28-bBPwoqhHp7BgO95TWo9TSY_Q&s=0EUkoOKW3xXdOMeNmk5wCh4d-UrCKouv2xy7gqVpFlc&e=" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">IPC/BC Accreditation & Access Model for Non-Public Data [community.icann.org]</span></a>.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The related workspace and resources are here:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_x_WwAFBQ&d=DwMF-g&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=HedNXfBayuWxdPer7COiCJBd39KxvJQIgCaiDYF2Tm8&m=J6Bs6Ufrfni4JROU28-bBPwoqhHp7BgO95TWo9TSY_Q&s=RvrreEJ9i5KX2ww4915wK2CP7AsVWPjtfDzl00EdnyM&e=" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">https://community.icann.org/x/WwAFBQ [community.icann.org]</span></a>.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">FYI Alan and Jonathan, Holly has indicated today may be busier than anticipated to create a draft.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Please let me know how I may assist you.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Evin<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0in 0in;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><b><span style="font-size: 12pt;">From:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style="font-size: 12pt;">"<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</span></a>><br><b>Reply-To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">h.raiche@internode.on.net</span></a>><br><b>Date:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Wednesday, May 2, 2018 at 2:49 AM<br><b>To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>ALAC List <<a href="mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org</span></a>>, "<a href="mailto:JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org</span></a>>, Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</span></a>>, Evin Erdogdu <<a href="mailto:evin.erdogdu@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">evin.erdogdu@icann.org</span></a>>, ICANN At-Large Staff <<a href="mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">staff@atlarge.icann.org</span></a>><br><b>Subject:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>[Ext] Fwd: [Accred-Model] DEADLINE EXTENDED | Annotated - WHOIS Accreditation and Access Model v1.4</span><o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Folks<br><br>We DO have a tiny bit more time. So Jonathan, I had only a small change to your text - which I put on the wiki. In 24 hours, I think we can agree on words - and then put something together. We certainly had lots of contributions and it would be a waste of everyone's efforts not to say something now that the deadline has been extendedn<br><br>And Evin - where is the link to the wiki on the accreditation model. Could it please be found and put up so that we can have a final attempt<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><br><br>Thanks<br><br>HOlly<br><br><br>----- Original Message -----<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">From:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">"Vayra Fabricio (Perkins Coie)" <<a href="mailto:FVayra@perkinscoie.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">FVayra@perkinscoie.com</span></a>><o:p></o:p></div></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">To:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">"<a href="mailto:accred-model@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">accred-model@icann.org</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:accred-model@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">accred-model@icann.org</span></a>><o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Cc:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Sent:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Tue, 1 May 2018 23:09:15 +0000<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Subject:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">[Accred-Model] DEADLINE EXTENDED | Annotated - WHOIS Accreditation and Access Model v1.4<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Please be advised that the deadline for comments on the current model<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><u>is extended</u><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>to Friday, 4 May 2018 at 4PM UTC (12 PM EDT, 9 AM PDT). <o:p></o:p></div></div><p style="margin-right: 0in; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></p><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">As a reminder, the current model can be found here:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/accred-model/attachments/20180420/f2869f82/Annotated-WHOISAccreditationandAccessModelv1.4-0001.pdf" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/accred-model/attachments/20180420/f2869f82/Annotated-WHOISAccreditationandAccessModelv1.4-0001.pdf</span></a><o:p></o:p></div></div><p style="margin-right: 0in; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></p><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Comments to-date are archived here:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/accred-model/" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: purple;">https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/accred-model/</span></a><o:p></o:p></div></div><p style="margin-right: 0in; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></p><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">We look forward to your further feedback.<o:p></o:p></div></div><p style="margin-right: 0in; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <o:p></o:p></p><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></div></div><p style="margin-right: 0in; 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