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You were heard before, but I was really at a loss to know how to reduce
the size that much and still make the arguments that I (and others)
believe are needed to counter the negative perceptions that could lead to
rejection. And give that the document must be submitted within a few
hours, there is really no way for someone else to take over the task and
get ALAC buy-in on the result.<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
At 30/04/2016 05:02 AM, Maureen Hilyard wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Hi all<br><br>
I've said it before but not with such specificity. My
recommendations:<br><br>
1. Incorporate the key ideas in the "Proposal" section into the
Executive Summary <br><br>
2. Merge the "Background" and the "importance of Face to
Face" meetings into a couple of paragraphs<br>
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3. Shorten the bullet pointed items in the "MultiYear Planning
section" to key ideas only, present them after a short
introduction<br><br>
4. End with the conclusion and next steps, as is :)<br><br>
3 pages MAX. (plus your graphic and annexes). At the moment we are
competing with the bylaws for quantity. <br><br>
Maureen<br><br>
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On Fri, Apr 29, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Alan Greenberg
<<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>
> wrote:<br>
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<dd>Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up
editing (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).<br><br>
<dd>Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.<br><br>
<dd>Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment
prior to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.<font color="#888888"><br><br>
<dd>Alan<br>
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