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Alan:<br>
Sometimes to understand a document I have to edit it.<br>
<br>
If any of these edits are of assistance to you and others, good.
Their purpose was merely to put into correct or comprehensible
English at some points where the draft text was not grammatical, or
idiomatic, or where, in one case, the text was incoherent.<br>
<br>
TMD<br>
<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 12/14/2015 1:19 AM, Alan Greenberg
wrote:<br>
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The IANA Issues WG met on Friday to discuss possible issue on the
CCWG-Accountability 3rd draft proposal. <br>
<br>
The CCWG documents can be founds at
<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=56145016"
eudora="autourl">
https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=56145016</a>.<br>
<br>
The document discussed at the IANA-Issues meeting can be found
linked to
the Agenda Item 3 of
<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://community.icann.org/x/PIdlAw" eudora="autourl">
https://community.icann.org/x/PIdlAw</a> (entitled <b>Review of
Proposal
and Potential ALAC Positions</b>).<br>
<br>
We need to send a summary of our comments to the CCWG today (in
time for
a CCWG meeting on Tuesday at 06:00 UTC). The attached document
summarizes
the issues as modified by the discussion during the
teleconference.<br>
<br>
Please send any comments in sufficient time for me to integrate
them (as
appropriate) into the documents. In particular, is there anything
here
that is counter to the tone or detail of the discussion?<br>
<br>
The Final Public Comment must be submitted no later than 21
December. It
will no doubt closely follow the attached document, but may well
include
other issues that come to light over the next days.<br>
<br>
As ALL ALAC member will be asked to vote on the Public Comments
and will
ultimately have to decide whether to ratify the CCWG Proposal,
this is
both important and time-sensitive.<br>
<br>
To the extent that is possible and you feel appropriate, please
involve
your RALOs.<br>
<br>
Alan<br>
<br>
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