[ALAC] ALAC Comment on the EPDP Registration Data Draft Policy

[Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi]

Thank you Alan for sharing the document. I spotted three minor typos which I highlighted in red.

Thanks again
Hadia

From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
Sent: Monday, November 21, 2022 2:03 AM
To: Chantelle Doerksen <chantelle.doerksen at icann.org>; ALAC <alac at atlarge-lists.icann.org>; Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia at tra.gov.eg>
Subject: ALAC Comment on the EPDP Registration Data Draft Policy

Attached is the formal reply form completed in accordance with the discussions during recent CPWG meetings.

There are comments on:

Section 4: Effective Date
Section 10: Disclosure requests
Background
Thick Whois Transition Policy

Alan
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