[ALAC] Almost final Multi-Year GA/Summit Proposal

Fouad Bajwa fouadbajwa at gmail.com
Sat Apr 30 11:25:12 UTC 2016


Sometimes defining a problem statement in the beginning and giving it
a solution followed by a backgrounder is a better way of understanding
the request or needs. Its a unique approach but is the one that boards
of many organizations prefer, its called getting to the point quickly.

On Sat, Apr 30, 2016 at 2:02 PM, Maureen Hilyard
<maureen.hilyard at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi all
>
> I've said it before but not with such specificity. My recommendations:
>
> 1. Incorporate the key ideas in the "Proposal" section into the Executive
> Summary
>
> 2. Merge the "Background" and the "importance of Face to Face" meetings into
> a couple of paragraphs
>
> 3. Shorten the bullet pointed items in the "MultiYear Planning section" to
> key ideas only, present them after a short introduction
>
> 4. End with the conclusion and next steps, as is :)
>
> 3 pages MAX. (plus your graphic and annexes).  At the moment we are
> competing with the bylaws for quantity.
>
> Maureen
>
>
>
> On Fri, Apr 29, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
> wrote:
>>
>> Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up editing
>> (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).
>>
>> Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.
>>
>> Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment prior
>> to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.
>>
>> Alan
>>
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