[ALAC] Almost final Multi-Year GA/Summit Proposal
maureen.hilyard at gmail.com
Sat Apr 30 09:02:18 UTC 2016
I've said it before but not with such specificity. My recommendations:
1. Incorporate the key ideas in the "Proposal" section into the Executive
2. Merge the "Background" and the "importance of Face to Face" meetings
into a couple of paragraphs
3. Shorten the bullet pointed items in the "MultiYear Planning section" to
key ideas only, present them after a short introduction
4. End with the conclusion and next steps, as is :)
3 pages MAX. (plus your graphic and annexes). At the moment we are
competing with the bylaws for quantity.
On Fri, Apr 29, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
> Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up editing
> (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).
> Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.
> Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment prior
> to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.
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