[ALAC] Almost final Multi-Year GA/Summit Proposal

[Maureen Hilyard]

Hi all

I've said it before but not with such specificity. My recommendations:

1. Incorporate the key ideas in the "Proposal" section into the Executive
Summary

2. Merge the "Background" and the "importance of Face to Face" meetings
into a couple of paragraphs

3. Shorten the bullet pointed items in the "MultiYear Planning section" to
key ideas only, present them after a short introduction

4. End with the conclusion and next steps, as is :)

3 pages MAX. (plus your graphic and annexes).  At the moment we are
competing with the bylaws for quantity.

Maureen



On Fri, Apr 29, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
wrote:

> Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up editing
> (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).
>
> Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.
>
> Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment prior
> to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.
>
> Alan
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