[ALAC] URGENT: Draft Comment on CCWG Proposal - Last call for changes

[Alan Greenberg]

That is how it will be submitted. The PDF was only for our review, but it has several quirks that cause it to sometimes display improperly and not print at all.
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Sent from my mobile. Please excuse brevity and typos.

On December 21, 2015 1:35:47 PM EST, Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com> wrote:
>Perhaps it may be better to copy and paste the survey responses in the
>online form. Nevertheless, I expect those collating the feedback will
>read
>the document with a system based PDF reader
>
>Cheers!
>On Dec 21, 2015 7:17 PM, "Dev Anand Teelucksingh" <devtee at gmail.com>
>wrote:
>
>> Indeed, downloading and opening it in the desktop reader in Adobe
>> Reader, does show a scroll bar to expand the comment field, in
>gmail's
>> PDF preview, its cut off.
>> So the solution is to download the PDF and use a PDF viewer like
>Adobe
>> Reader to view the document fully
>>
>> Dev Anand
>>
>> On Mon, Dec 21, 2015 at 1:30 PM, Sébastien Bachollet
>> <sebastien at bachollet.com> wrote:
>> > If you clic in the box (of comments) you will get a scroll window?
>> > SeB
>> >
>> > Skills are useful but diversity is essential.
>> >
>> > Sébastien Bachollet
>> > +33 6 07 66 89 33
>> > Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/
>> > Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien at bachollet.com>
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Le 21/12/2015 18:03, « Dev Anand Teelucksingh »
>> > <alac-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org on behalf of
>devtee at gmail.com> a
>> > écrit :
>> >
>> >>Just to note that the lengthy comment for Recommendation 5 is cut
>off
>> >>on Page 13 and possibly for Recommendation 2 on page 8 of the PDF.
>> >>
>> >>Dev Anand
>> >>
>> >>
>> >>
>> >>On Mon, Dec 21, 2015 at 11:57 AM, Alan Greenberg
>> >><alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
>> >>> This message was supposed to have been sent on Saturday evening
>(my
>> >>>time)
>> >>> but unfortunately was sent only to the IANA-Issues list.
>> >>>
>> >>> The original plan (as outlined below) was to try to get a
>majority of
>> >>>ALAC
>> >>> Members to ratify this prior to submission, but that is no longer
>> >>>practical.
>> >>> We will submit at the deadline (Monday, 21 December, 23:59 UTC)
>> >>>factoring in
>> >>> any corrections at the time, and ratify during the ALAC meeting
>> >>>tomorrow.
>> >>>
>> >>>
>>
>>
>>>>-------------------------------------------------------------------------
>> >>>------------
>> >>>
>> >>> Attached please find the draft text for the ALAC response to the
>Public
>> >>> Comment on the CCWG-Accountability 3rd Draft Proposal.
>> >>>
>> >>> The text is based on the answers:
>> >>> - reviewed and revised by the IANA-Issues WG at its meetings of
>on 04
>> >>> December 2015 and 11 December 2015
>> >>> - reviewed and adjusted based on the Webinars of 16/17 December
>2015
>> >>>
>> >>> Please review the responses and identify any errors including
>typos no
>> >>>later
>> >>> than 13:00 UTC on Monday, 21 December 2015. Earlier input will be
>much
>> >>> appreciated. Once any revisions are incorporated, a final version
>will
>> >>>be
>> >>> published and a ratification vote of the ALAC will begin. The
>vote will
>> >>>be
>> >>> kept open for 2 days, but we will need sufficient votes to ensure
>that
>> >>>it is
>> >>> ratified by 23:59 UTC on 21 December 2015 when the comment is
>> >>>officially due
>> >>> to be submitted.
>> >>>
>> >>> Alan
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