[ALAC] REVISED: Follow-up on the ALAC Advice to the Board regarding PICs

[Alan Greenberg]

As you have seen, Olivier had identified a number of changes to the 
document which made it more grammatically correct, clarified the 
meaning, or otherwise improved the document. None of the changes 
altered the overall intent or tone of the document.

I am attaching the new version as well as a redline version showing 
the changes.

The vote was not halted during this process. If anyone who voted 
before this change was posted feels they must change their vote, 
please let Ariel know.

I do apologize for the haste with which this was done and the 
resultant problems. I do believe that the timing was important, and 
we can only hope that we will be successful in changing how these new 
TLDs are rolled out.

Alan
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