[ALAC] Analysis of AoC Whois Report Recommendations

[Carlton Samuels]

+1.

- Carlton

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On Tue, Sep 11, 2012 at 2:04 PM, Salanieta T. Tamanikaiwaimaro <
salanieta.tamanikaiwaimaro at gmail.com> wrote:

> Good to go Alan. Awesome job as always :)
>
> On Wed, Sep 12, 2012 at 6:20 AM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca
> >wrote:
>
> >  :-)
> >
> >
> >
> > At 11/09/2012 12:56 PM, Evan Leibovitch wrote:
> >
> >
> > On 11 September 2012 12:19, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca >
> > wrote:
> >
> >  However, on re-reading our statement, I find that it is less than
> > clear. Or gramatically correct.
> >
> > I suggest replacing it with:
> >
> > >Perhaps, but not obvious.  Changes would likely be the result of
> > >bilateral negotiations between the parties and ICANN. *If*
> > >registries and/or registrars will need to take action, such as for
> > >increased reporting, policy development may be required.
> >
> >
> > Nice catch by Sala. Great edit by Alan. I'm very comfortable with the
> > result, good to send IMO.
> >
> > - Evan
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > So thanks for causing me to reread it!  :-)
> >
> > Alan
> >
> > At 11/09/2012 05:49 AM, Salanieta T. Tamanikaiwaimaro wrote:
> > >Dear Alan,
> > >
> > >Just a suggestion for minor edits. This is particularly when
> > >rendering advice to the Board, where we use language like "perhaps"
> > >can communicate "indecision" or "ambiguity" and we need to use firm
> > >and clear language because we are advising them.
> >
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> >
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