[ALAC] Fwd: ATRT Final report and recommendations as sent to the ICANN Board.

Fri Dec 31 23:48:47 UTC 2010

Thanks Cheryl for your dedication in this tremendous effort and thanks to all the participants in this WG.
209 pages to read with I am sure full of information and work to follow.
Happy new year;
All the best
SeB

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> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : alac-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:alac-bounces at atlarge-
> lists.icann.org] De la part de Cheryl Langdon-Orr
> Envoyé : vendredi 31 décembre 2010 18:22
> À : ALAC Working List; At-Large Worldwide
> Cc : ICANN AtLarge Staff
> Objet : [ALAC] Fwd: ATRT Final report and recommendations as sent to
> the ICANN Board.
> 
> In advance of more formal publication of the attached document please
> find, FYI, the Final Report and Recommendations of the Accountability
> and Transparency Review Team sent a short while ago to the ICANN
> Board...
> 
> Staff can be post this to our usual announce and relevant lists please
> and insert it in the ATRT Wiki page we set up at the beginning of this
> process.
> 
> It has been my honor and privilege to serve as your ALAC representative
> on this inaugural ATRT post AoC;  I also trust you will be well
> satisfied with the outcomes we were able to establish, and see this as
> an important foundation for the work of the next ATRT and in the
> improvement of ICANN's A&T...
> 
> 
> Cheryl Langdon-Orr
> (CLO)
> 
> 
> 
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: Brian Cute <brianacute at gmail.com>
> Date: 1 January 2011 04:32
> Subject: Re: Latest draft
> To: olivier.muron at orange-ftgroup.com
> Cc: manal at tra.gov.eg, ceo at auda.org.au, jbladel at godaddy.com,
> langdonorr at gmail.com, zhangxinsheng at miit.gov.cn, eiriarte at alfa-
> redi.org, lstrickling at ntia.doc.gov, wadelman at godaddy.com,
> peter.dengatethrush at icann.org, caffsouza at gmail.com,
> falexander at ntia.doc.gov, guofeng at catr.cn, fabio at colasanti.it,
> chrisdisspain888 at msn.com, alice.jansen at icann.org,
> olof.nordling at icann.org, louienet at gmail.com
> 
> 
> RT,
> 
> The Final Recommendations have just been sent to the Board and are
> attached here.  Alice, could you please see that this is posted
> promptly to the ICANN website (as an Announcement) and to the AoC site
> as well.
> 
> Thanks to all for the great work in the last week!  It's not perfect,
> but it is in good shape thanks to your efforts.  It has been and honor
> and a pleasure to work with all of you.  Have a very Happy New Year!
> 
> Best regards,
> Brian
> 
> On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 8:06 AM, <olivier.muron at orange-ftgroup.com>
> wrote:
> 
> >  I find the final draft very fine!
> >
> > A small edit page 67: the face-to-face meeting was held on October
> > 11-13, 2010 and not 2007
> >
> > Happy New Year to all of you.
> >
> > Olivier
> > (just back in Paris after a US vacation prolongated by the snow)
> >  ------------------------------
> > *De :* Louie Lee [mailto:louienet at gmail.com] *Envoy  :* vendredi 31
> > d cembre 2010 10:02 *  :* Brian Cute *Cc :* Manal Ismail; Chris
> > Disspain; JamesM. Bladel; Cheryl Langdon-Orr; ZHANG Xinsheng; Erick
> > Iriarte Iriarte Ahon; MURON Olivier RD-DIR-ISS; Lawrence E.
> > Strickling; Warren Adelman; Peter Dengate Thrush; Carlos Affonso
> > Pereira de Souza; Fiona Alexander; guo; Fabio Colasanti;
> > chrisdisspain888 at msn.com; Alice Jansen; Olof Nordling *Objet :* Re:
> > Latest draft
> >
> >   No glaring error!  Just need some line justification adjustments
> > here and there.
> >
> > If you want to correct a word for me....
> > The "member" in "Independent Expert team member" in my Appendix text
> > should be plural: members.
> >
> > Thank you!
> >
> > Louie
> > --
> >
> >
> > On Dec 30, 2010, at 10:12 PM, Brian Cute <brianacute at gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> >   FINAL DRAFT ATTACHED - 2 more edits to go.
> >
> > I have two tasks for the morning:
> >
> > 1.  Revise the page numbers in the footnotes referencing the Berkman
> > Center report since the pagination has changed.
> >
> > 2.  Resolve the issue of the missing footnote text for 3 footnotes.
> >
> > Beyond that I believe I have captured most of the suggested edits.
> IF
> > YOU SEE A GLARING ERROR, PLEASE CALL IT TO MY ATTENTION.
> >
> > Once I have addressed #1 and 2 above, I will send the final PDF
> > version to Alice and Olof for posting.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Brian
> >
> > 2010/12/30 Brian Cute < <brianacute at gmail.com>brianacute at gmail.com>
> >
> >> RT,
> >>
> >> Attached is the latest version.  I have been maintaining my own
> >> version of the "master" document and have now integrated the
> comments
> >> from Larry and a couple of substantive edits from Louie (Appendix A)
> >> and Cheryl (Recommendation 19).  I am still adding some of the
> >> grammar and formatting edits from Louie and Cheryl.  I also added an
> edit to Appendix A re:
> >> Management of Public Comments.
> >>
> >> Please provide feedback on the following:
> >>
> >> 1.  Currently, the "priority recommendations are listed as # 7, 9,
> >> 10, 11, 15, 16, 17 and 23.  PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU AGREE WITH
> THIS LIST.
> >>
> >> 2.  Let me know if I have missed substantive edits you provided in
> >> the last few days.
> >>
> >> Please note the following:
> >>
> >> 1. I have asked Denise Michel and Alice for assistance in getting
> >> links to the documents for the 2 missing footnotes (James is
> >> assisting on one as
> >> well.)
> >>
> >> 2.  I will do a final edit of all the footnotes and a spell check.
> >>
> >> If there are any other items, please send me edits now.  I intend to
> >> send this to the Board no later than tomorrow morning U.S. EST.
> >>
> >> Thanks all for your focus on getting this document finished.
> >>
> >> Regards,
> >> Brian
> >> P.S.  As requested, Chris is copied above on his
> <http://msn.com/>msn.comemail.
> >> 2010/12/30 Manal Ismail < <manal at tra.gov.eg>manal at tra.gov.eg>
> >>
> >> Brian ..
> >>>
> >>> I thought it's worth bringing to your attention that the version
> >>> Louie commented on (the latest) is different from the version Larry
> >>> commented on ..
> >>>
> >>> --Manal
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> ________________________________
> >>>
> >>> ??: Louie Lee [mailto: <louienet at gmail.com>louienet at gmail.com]
> >>> ????? ???????: ?????? 30/12/2010 05:41 ?
> >>> ???: Manal Ismail; Brian Cute
> >>> ????: Chris Disspain; James M. Bladel; Cheryl Langdon-Orr; ZHANG
> >>> Xinsheng; Erick Iriarte Iriarte Ahon; Olivier Muron; Lawrence E.
> >>> Strickling; Warren Adelman; Peter Dengate Thrush; Carlos Affonso
> >>> Pereira de Souza; Fiona Alexander; guo; Fabio Colasanti
> >>> ???????: Re: Latest draft
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Err.... and here's the attachment. :)
> >>>
> >>>
> >>
> >  <ATRTFinalRecommendations.doc>
> >
> >